I haven't yet completed my cover lines and the price of the magazine as of yet.
I also need to add another picture to the bottom right, finish the news and reviews section and organise the sections correctly. Also need to add a different colour so that it appeals.
I haven't yet typed up my DPS.
your contents page is good you could increase the size of your cover lines to attract the reader and also your contents page text can be increased in size as it is a little hard to read it would be better if you neaten it up separating each story so it is easier for the reader
ReplyDeleteA good range of images. You a good use of different fonts with your contents page and a clear indication of where each topic is on each page. In addition, a nice bright colour scheme to attract readers.
ReplyDeleteI really like the design of your masthead as it is eye catching and bright. Also i like the wide variety of images you chose to use on your contents page. However, i think it would be good if your could increase the size of your cover lines so it's more clear to read. :)
ReplyDeleteIlike that you have kept your whole thing quite simple especially on the front cover as it draws at the attention to your cover star. Having said that I think that you need to to add more onto your front cover as it looks a bit too plain. moving onto your contents page, i like that you have a variety of mages and that they take most of the space on your contents page and are relevant as you have added page numbers to them.
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